Bathe In Blood – 2

Dad and Sam were long gone. Mom is out in the garden watering her flowers. It’s summer vacation and all of my friends are out of town. We are going to our aunt’s place in  Ohio next week, so we’ll be here in Almont for a few days. I can see that this is going to be a boring vacation. I hate these long vacations, they’re as boring as heck!

With nothing to do and the whole day ahead of me, I feel that there is nothing better than taking a nap. I turned on my iPod and listened to a few Coldplay tunes, when I fell sound asleep. I hear a ring coming from afar.. It sounds like my cellphone. Is this a dream? I finally opened my eyes reluctantly and grabbed my cell phone from the side table.

“Hello?”, I said with a sleepy voice.

“Hi Eva! How are you?”

“Hey Iris. I’m fine, thanks. How about you?”

“I’m doing great. It’s fun here in Auburn! I’m going out to the skateboard park with my brothers today. What about you? Having fun back there in Almont?”

“Nah, it’s boring here. I’ve got nothing to do lately!”

“Ah, I see. You should go out somewhere. Oops, Eva I’ve got to go. They’re calling me. I’ll talk to you later and have a good day!

“Thanks, Iris. Have fun! Bye.”

“Bye.”

That was Iris, one of the most talkative and hyper-active friend I’ve ever had. She’s always doing something cool and fun. I wish I was doing something  right now. I’m suddenly awake all of a sudden and I’m feeling very thirsty. I’ll go down to the kitchen and fetch a glass of water.

I went to garden to have a look at mom and she wasn’t there. Where could she be?

“Mom, Are you here?” I scouted all around the house but she wasn’t there. She’s definitely at aunt Beck’s place next door I thought. Ah, these old women and their family talk…

 

 

To be continued….
Note:Read the synopsis here. Readers, please feel free to leave comments and opinions below in the comments area. I am open to comments on the Bathe in Blood series. All copyright is reserved by Abinav Thakuri. This work cannot be produced or replicated anywhere else without the owner’s prior consent. The series will be printed into a full length novel and will be available for purchase  when completed.
 

Bathe In Blood – 1

It’s been days since I have stepped outside the house. I’ve been ignoring calls from friends and relatives because it feels like I no longer have the voice to talk to them. I’d rather be alone, for at least I feel a lot safer here. These last few days have been very weird. What I have seen, I just cannot explain. Is it a dream or is it reality? This is a question I’ve been asking myself a thousand times. I still remember last Monday. I didn’t know…I just didn’t know…

(Last Monday)

“Eva, come down for breakfast honey. The boys are in a hurry to go fishing today! ” . Mom stood in the kitchen, looking up at me coming down the stairs. She had a big smile on her face like always. At 45, she looks younger than her age. She is a peaceful woman, loves everyone and everything around her and sells home-made crafts. Everyone calls her Ab, her real name being Abby Garcia.

“Hey Princess! Make sure you don’t go too far into the woods today.Stay with your mom. We heard romours of the Martians entering town yesterday. They might be camping in the woods”. Dad had his common grin that looked pretty evil at times and stuffed a large piece of the sandwich into his mouth like he was in some eating contest. He has a sense of humour that could get rather irritating sometimes. People call him Rocky while his real name is Ron Garcia. He is a farmer.

My little brother, Sam eats his breakfast quietly. He doesn’t talk all that much. But I doubt that it’s just because he’s bored with talking to us. He is a hardcore metal-head,the kind who’d prefer praying to the likes of Metallica rather than Jesus Christ. At 16, he has been busy the last few days finding members for his first heavy metal band.

“Are you done yet Sam?”, dad cried out loud with a hint of restlessness to his voice. He loved going out for fishing.

“Yes dad, let’s go.”, said Sam swallowing the last piece of his sandwich.

To be continued….
Note:Read the synopsis here. Readers, please feel free to leave comments and opinions below in the comments area. I am open to comments on the Bathe in Blood series. All copyright is reserved by Abinav Thakuri. This work cannot be produced or replicated anywhere else without the owner’s prior consent. The series will be printed into a full length novel and will be available for purchase  when completed.
 

Bathe in Blood


I’m excited to tell you that I have started writing my first crime fiction novel titled, ” Bathe in Blood”. I will be posting parts of my writing here as the story gradually progresses. Here’s a short blurb to give you an idea of the story behind it.

“It’s been days since I have stepped outside the house. I’ve been ignoring calls from friends and relatives because it feels like I no longer have the voice to talk to
them. I’d rather be alone, for at least I feel a lot safer here. These last few days have been very weird. What I have seen, I just cannot explain. Is it a dream or
is it reality? This is a question I’ve been asking myself a thousand times.”

Eva is a 21 year old daughter of a farmer who has recently moved to her aunt’s house in Athens County, Ohio. She has just gone through a hard time with the mysterious death of her mother. She is still recovering from the loss of her beloved mom, when she finds out that her aunt has been very ill since the last few days and decides to move to her aunt’s place for a while. She wants to get away from her home-town for a while and also take care of her aunt. Little does she know that her life is going to change forever.

Eva decides to find out the reason behind her mother’s death. She gathers bits and pieces of information, when mysterious deaths start taking place around her. With some hard work and determination she finally tracks the murderer behind the mayhem, only to surprise herself. Does Eva  not know a part of herself?

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The Book Was Better Than The Movie #1

Like most readers, I’m excited every time a book is adapted for the screen. You know, when you’re reading a book you form a sort of visual adaption in your mind. So, it’s always exciting to get to know how the film depicts that vision. But there are often times when I am disappointed because the movie just doesn’t live up to my expectations. I’m sure that you may have felt the same way for a movie that was adapted from a book you loved to read.

I have been privately researching book to screen adaptions for a considerable time, so I’ll be running a series of articles entitled, “The Book Was Better Than The Movie”. Throughout the series I’ll be listing books that were far better than the movies based on them and a very brief description alongside. Don’t be shy and feel free to leave your opinions and suggestions in the comments below.

Memoirs of a Geisha by Arthur Golden. 
In Memoirs of a Geisha, novelist Arthur Golden enters into a remote and shimmeringly exotic world. For the protagonist of this flawless debut novel is Sayuri, one of Japan’s most celebrated geisha, a woman who is both performer and courtesan, slave and goddess.

Ella Enchanted by Gail Carson Levine
At birth, Ella is inadvertently cursed by an imprudent young fairy named Lucinda, who bestows on her the “gift” of obedience. Anything anyone tells her to do, Ella must obey.
 
 

The House on the Gulf by Margaret Peterson Haddix
When Britt’s older brother, Bran, lands a summer job house-sitting for the Marquises, an elderly couple, it seems like a great opportunity. Britt and Bran have moved to Florida so their mother can finish college, and the house-sitting income will allow their mom to quit her job and take classes full-time. Having never lived in a real house before, Britt is thrilled. There’s only one problem: Britt starts to suspect her family isn’t supposed to be there.

Jitter Joint: A Novel Of Suspense by Howard Swindle
In Jitter Joint, award-winning journalist Howard Swindle delivers Jeb Quinlin, a Dallas homicide detective combating crime-and his own personal demons.
 
 

The Witch of Portobello by Paulo Coelho
The Witch of Portobello is the story of a mysterious woman named Athena, told by the many who knew her well—or hardly at all. Like The Alchemist, The Witch of Portobello is the kind of story that will transform the way readers think about love, passion, joy, and sacrifice.

 

Resources: Parts of the descriptions taken from GoodReads

The Kite Runner by Khaled Hosseini

I love reading books and I’ll have to admit that I’m addicted to it, to the point where each day feels incomplete without reading one. Well I have this desire to snatch every single book in the shelve, every time I visit a book store. It’s like I’m drooling on the inside. And every time I finish reading a book I always want to yap yap my thoughts on the it. So I thought, what better way than to share my thoughts and reviews on books here! If you’re like me, I guess I’ll take you one step closer to picking up that next book you’ll be devouring for the next few days. So let’s start with one of my all time favourites, “The Kite Runner” by Khaled Hosseini.

This wonderfully written debut novel by Hosseini gives a glimpse of life in Afghanistan prior to the Russian invasion and introduces two memorable characters, Amir and Hassan. Amir struggles to earn his father’s love and attention and finally succeeds by winning a kite-flying competition. Hassan offers to track down the opponent’s runaway kite as a prize for his friend, Amir. While finding it, the neighborhood bullies trap and rape him, as Amir hides too terrified to help. This changes their lives and friendship forever and the memory of his cowardly act haunts Amir as he grows older.

The two of them go their own separate ways with their fathers. Amir attends college, gets married and fulfills his dream of becoming a writer. When Amir receives word of  Hassan’s death under the Taliban, he returns to Kabul to learn about the fate of Hassan’s son. The story hits a sad turn in between but its wonderful how it end’s in hope.

Rating: 5/5